Friday, December 16, 2005

Writing Poetry in a Noisy Room

Here is some more work from the all-night party.. It is now 2:30 am.. :)

Writing Poetry in a Noisy Room
- Andrew Williams

Remember, concentration is key:
let the vibe enfold you,
twist you and mold you.

The cheating cardplayer's glee:
hear his song around you,
inside you, rebound you.

A child, falling asleep:
feel a yawn fill you,
control you, lull you.

The frequent eyemeeting with she:
notice love consume you,
flow through you, doom you.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Good stuff, real good inner ryhme. I know what your going thru - just trying to get some feed-back on your work is frustrating

Anonymous said...

Good stuff, real good inner ryhme. I know what your going thru - just trying to get some feed-back on your work is frustrating